Name : Ratna wilis
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KOTAWARINGIN LAMA CITY
One of the best
cities to visit in central Kalimantan is kotawaringin lama city. It has some of
the most interesting landmarks and tourist spots. First, there is mosque to
visit, such as Kyai Gede mosque. The mosque is the old fashioned in the city. In
the mosque many people learn about religious study. Second, there is cemetery
of Kyai Gede. The longest cemetery is about 7 meters. Third, when we walk on the
east of cemetery, there is kingdom. To get there, we just walk about one kilometer. The
kingdom called Astana Almulsari. Four, kotawaringin lama has Tringin harbuor. However,
the harbour always any visitors that will going to some places. After that,
nearest of harbour there are markets one of market is Mega Mart. Most of people shopping in mega mart because very
cheap. Than, there is lake called “danau Gatal”. Its very interesting, because
the beautiful landscape. In concluding, kotawaringin lama is the most beautiful
to choises for holiday.
your paragraph has already good so difficult to find your mistake but just 1 for connection word "four" writing the true is fourth. hahaha thank you
BalasHapusi think your paragraph good but in sentence "one of the best cities to visit in central kalimantan is kota waringin lama city. it's city not cities :)
BalasHapus