Definition paragraph sleigh bells
(giring giring) dance
Steps 1: brainstorming by questioning.
a.
Definition
of sleigh bells dance? give example
b.
How the
popular of sleigh bells dance in central
Kalimantan dan Barito?
c.
Story
of sleigh bells dance?
Steps 2 : outline of paragraph.
a.
Topic
sentence :
One of the best
dance in central Kalimantan is sleigh bells dance.
b.
-Supporting
sentence :
Definition of sleigh
bells dance.
Supporting sentence
:
Sleigh bells dance
supplies are thin
bamboo (telang) contains seeds
pinding.
-supprting sentence :
The popular of sleigh
bells dance in central Kalimantan dan
regancy Barito.
-supporting sentence :
Sleigh bells dance
danced when there
is an event like welcoming
guests as well as a distraction
to the parties or a particular event.
c.
Concluding
sentence.
In concluding, as the younger generation should preserve, study, and
preserve the traditional dances from extinction.
Steps 3 :
First paragraph
sliegh bells (giring giring)
dance
One of the best danced in central Kalimantan is sleigh dance. Sleigh bells dance
is one of the dance
areas and districts of
Central Kalimantan and Barito in
particular. For example, the sleigh bells dance. For the people of Central Kalimantan
and Barito regency, danced bells are overflowing expression of excitement and
pleasure of the community. Next ,sleigh bells danced supplies are thin bamboo contains
seeds pinding. Sleigh bells brought by the dancer
is thin bamboo (telang) contains the seeds "Piding" and shaken to
create rhythmic tones are the bells. Than, the popular of sleigh bells danced in central Kalimantan dan regancy Barito. This dance was popularized by the Dayak tribe Ma'anyan and danced in
joyful events, welcoming
guests as well as a distraction
to the parties or a particular event. In addition, Sleigh bells dance
is also used as a social dance among young
people. After that, Sleigh bells danced when
there is an event. The events such as welcoming guests as
well as a distraction to the
parties or a particular event. In concluding,
as the younger generation should preserve,
study, and preserve
the traditional sleigh bells dance
from extinction.
Sleigh bells(Giring
Giring) dance : dance in Central Kalimantan and
Barito regency.
Barito in particular : one of regancy
in kalimantan.
Piding : content of
piding.
the Dayak tribe
Ma'anyan : Ma’anyan is
one of tribe Dayak.
I think this paragraph is not unity and coherence. in every supporting sentence, you should use signal order. Topic sentence and concluding sentence, you must underline. Every supporting sentence you should give example/minor.
BalasHapusI dont understand in your text there is (telang) what does it mean?
BalasHapusin the third sentence it is wrong position of signal (,).
I agree with mei that paragraph is not unity and coherence, and i suggest you to use the signal order. And the last pleas underline your topic sentence and concluding sentence, that will makes everyone easy to find it.
BalasHapus